Certainly a unique piece. Wine and wine glasses are so interesting to write about. I like the 3rd stanza, if you want to call it a stanza, of this the best. Really interesting. Keep writing! :)

Um.

This makes me heart you.

ny? Well, this is a great poem, played pretty well. Keep it up!

Creative. I like.

Im not sure of the connection bw the two pieces, but I do like this one... short, to the point, wel described and I love the ending.. unexpected

I LOVE that last line.. great job

i love the last two lines of this. . . .and i know what you mean about missing ny. it's one of the most amazing places on earth, it has a feeling that's almost impossible to find anywhere else. lovely poem.

i like how pretty it is in my head, and how honest it is in front of my eyes (because honesty is never beautiful). you were the firs author here that I read and was blwon away by, and you so, you will always be the one who makes me stop.think.breatheagain.

absolute poetry.

never been, sounds fascinating and violent


my pet is san fransisco.
i adore that city

Awesome work. The atmosphere you create amazes me.

adore that last stanza. short and sweet.

i thoroughly enjoyed the wording of this piece. This may not be the longest poem i've ever read, but i was entertained. I'll see you on your next update. - ADD-san

I enjoyed the wording - for some reason I felt humor in the piece although I don't believe that was your intention. That was also why I enjoyed it.

i love your writing. forever. this is gorgeous. guilt guilt Guilt. i love that. :)