Oh, Lord.

I want your babies and your heart and your mind and your brilliant, brilliant poetic style and. Oh. Oh oh oh oh, OH. You hurt me with "i forgot to say goodbye" and, yes, my love for you HURTS with that line and, uh, oh.

"a love tangible with guilt" - Oh oh oh oh oh OH.

* Noelle

its so visual; everything deescribed i can see hear touch smell. "and it's spilled down to the rats by now" my favorite line. it rings hard all on its own. i don't really understand the last line, but that's my fault not yours. :) very nice work. :)

love, .

i'm in love with your writing.

It's sad, and very beautiful. Your imagery is amazing.

the wine glass down at the cellar

i forgot to say goodbye

-i tried with a passion not to highlight the whole thing

you are still dripping amazing

This was mysterious and really liked that. It had a very edgy feel to it that worked well especially with the repetition of the word guilt. Just loved the emotions in this, well done x