Reviews for Just you and I - FictionPress.com

samora hiding in the mist 2007-12-18 ch 1,	i thought the same thing with my bf bt it didnt work good work keep wrighting christina
sunday night sky 2006-10-26 ch 1,	I like the repetition of this, and the flow is good. The poem naturally follows through a story, which is nice. Maybe some punctuation would help the rhythm? I don't know.. hmm... well anyways, nice piece! Keep writing...