I really liked this. It really got you to feel Camille's pain. The only thing was the other students didnt try to run but maybe she didnt see it but anywayz I really liked this!

Loved it. I absolutely loved it. Every sentence just layered onto the next with a rapidly building suspense that forcefully glued my eyes to the text. It was wonderfully written, with the mystery of the cedar box being revealed with a devastating, violent, and gorgeous ending. All of the inner thoughts and emotions were so beautifully concieved, and were so realistic and sadistic it was creepy. As said before... I love it.

Oh, and if you're looking for content for your C2, I think my story "Eat" should qualify.

Wow. o-o that was like. wowwhoawowwhoa. GOOD. great. wow.

Wow.

Incredible.

Haha, yeah I'm like...wow. awestruck.

Okie, please comment back n-n
~Frodo