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| Cheeseraptor5 2006-10-27 ch 1,  | abuseLoved it. I absolutely loved it. Every sentence just layered onto the next with a rapidly building suspense that forcefully glued my eyes to the text. It was wonderfully written, with the mystery of the cedar box being revealed with a devastating, violent, and gorgeous ending. All of the inner thoughts and emotions were so beautifully concieved, and were so realistic and sadistic it was creepy. As said before... I love it. Oh, and if you're looking for content for your C2, I think my story "Eat" should qualify. |
| Stale.Cracker 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. o-o that was like. wowwhoawowwhoa. GOOD. great. wow. Wow. Incredible. Haha, yeah I'm like...wow. awestruck. Okie, please comment back n-n ~Frodo |