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| Pandora's Envy 2007-09-13 ch 1,   | It was a pretty good story over-all. It wasn't absolutely terrifying, but fairly suspenseful. It would've been nice had it been just a bit longer, just a bit more detailed, but it is good as it is. Keep writing. |
| Tizbd 2006-10-27 ch 1, | I liked it. You created an atmosphere, but I'm not so sure about the last paragraph, I expected it to be scarier. It's good though, keep it up. :) |
| Royal Bliss 2006-10-26 ch 1, | Man, the Candyman and Bloody Mary always scared me when I was little. I really hope to read more of this. |
| Seisaset 2006-10-26 ch 1, | oh crap thats scary. Very well written. You should write some more one shots, they are amazing |
| mkrasinski 2006-10-26 ch 1, | THAT GOT ME SCARED. JESUS, KEEP WRITING! |