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Wayne Hiebert
2007-07-04
ch 9,
well.. i am back from the dead lol, i might be updating my stories b4 i leave but who knows, i will be gone for four months july thru oct. but when i get back i hope you dont get rid of this great story, i want to read what happens but anyways...for certian reasons i say, Kill Felton! i swear i would beat the living crap out of him... sry for the outburst.. i am one of those guys that hate it when guys do that kinda **...so many stories about that..but that isnt important,
anways keep it up and have a good one,
check ya later,
Wayne
JusticeWriter
2007-06-21
ch 9,
Nice. Luvs it. :)
fantasy4luvr
2007-06-07
ch 9,
omg i love ur story
friggin awesome storyline too
update soon pls
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic
2007-05-24
ch 8,
OMG
i love it!
please update pronto!
TwinkleHeart
2007-05-03
ch 8,
i think she shood dump whats his face and start haivng sex with caleb and then marry him =D
Wayne Hiebert
2007-04-30
ch 8,
wow...opened up, quite the upset. another great chapter!
check ya later,
Enyaw
Volo Purus.
2007-04-27
ch 8,
FELTON. So we meet him next.

I hope she and Caleb pretend to be together.

:]
Linka Moon
2007-04-20
ch 1,
It's an intersting concept. I can't wait to see how it develops.
Wayne Hiebert
2007-03-06
ch 7,
Just do your best to let us find out LOL well anyways great job, sometimes things dont go as planed and i think Natalia is falling for Caleb...hm...anyways...
Check ya later,
Dante (Enyaw/Wayne)
lilxseeker
2007-03-05
ch 7,
coolio story, update soon!
waiting4haykin
2007-03-02
ch 7,
I think that this is beginning to drag on a bit. Don't get me wrong. I love the story, and the characters are great (even if some are a little messed up). I feel for Natalia, but this is getting annoying as a reader. I'm sorry. I know I'm being mean, and you may hate me.

Know that I love this story and that I will faithfully read until the end no matter what. You're doing a great job; just don't let it drag too much.
PrincessPeach131
2007-03-01
ch 7,
I love this story! Ilove how multi-dimensional your characters are! And there's somuch mystery and sexual tension. I hope you have fun on spring break and then update soon! Cheers!
ind-fam
2007-02-14
ch 6,
Your story has a weak spot called Caleb. Here is the problem. I see Caleb as a beautiful object but asexual one. You need to give him girl friend if you need to succeed in making him exciting. Just saying he is hot is not going to be enough. And before making Caleb like Natalia, she needs to see him as a man. I feel like Caleb is a blank paper and you keep writing charecterstic as you go. Just a thought.
Keep wriitng
Volo Purus.
2007-02-13
ch 6,
Kelly is great.

I didn't notice any errors in this chapter.

It flowed pretty well overall.

Nice work!
Wayne Hiebert
2007-02-13
ch 5,
well another great one, but anyways, yeah that must suck to have a 10 year old kid kick your butt at laser tag as well as being a jerk at the same time. Anyways.. i got to stop saying that. But great job and i hope that Justin doesnt hurt himself over the girl, and Jason is getting closer to the truth now i think. but,
check ya later,
Wayne (Enyaw)
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