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kimper 2007-04-06 ch 1,	Hello :) Was just searching through my alerts for this story. Was wondering if there'd been any progress on this story or if you'd decided to drop it. I adored it :) Thanks!
Mical Alexander 2006-11-17 ch 4,	I adore this fic! Looking forward to your update.
Dammerung 2006-11-14 ch 4,	Description _is_ the mind's action though, dear Visionary. Besides, Patricia's exodus was certainly momentum in the generally forward direction.
kuroi-sakurapetals 2006-11-14 ch 4,	Oh but I liked the flowery descriptive bullcrap and the memory flashbacks though, I really wouldn't mind some action. Great chapter once again. I've found that I'm into more mature stories these days (can't stand all the rubbish anymore) so I've gone through several of my profiles and deleted some sugary flowery stuff with no plot. Fear not my sweet one, your stories have so much plot and depth that they shall forever be on my favorites list!! Looking forward to the next chapter with the long awaited action in it.
lucifel 2006-11-13 ch 4,	i'm tired of capitalizing crap. blah! here goes. you do a really good job with the side characters, like patricia. i can picture her completely, even though she's not the focus of the story. this wasn't boring at all. I love the particular way john was writing the christmas card. kind of reminded me of a teenage girl, but he does it in a much more endearing way. i would like to help henry decide the fate of that cake. he's becoming even more lovable with every chapter. almost stealing the spotlight from john . and that snowball scene was classic.
Dammerung 2006-11-12 ch 1,	Sorry, John, men wearing bow ties deserve to be made fun of. I've never been able to trust men in bow ties. Dunno why.
digikym 2006-11-07 ch 1,	Absolutely amazing first chapter, darling. I'm hooked beyond belief. I'm going to be spending the rest of what's left of my morning gripped to your story. Henry's just heart-breaking and John... John is just beautiful. I also love how Blake made an appearance as well. Yay for tossing up universes!
heart race 2006-11-05 ch 3,	keep on keeping on good chapter
kuroi-sakurapetals 2006-11-05 ch 3,	The tension was wonderful. Poor poor Henry. hehehe... don't push yourself to write long chapters. When you do, you'll just end up with stuff you don't want in the story (happens to me all the time). If I repeat what I said in the first two reviews you'll probably think that this girl doesn't have anything else to say but in actuality, you're work is consistant so I'll find myself repeating the same compliments over and over. Well great work and looking forward to an update.
nite3 2006-11-05 ch 3,	I totally bet that Henry doesn't even have a girlfriend, it's just his excuse. What a doorknob.
Laughing Cat 2006-11-04 ch 2,	Awesome story so far! I love how homophobe Henry is pursuing John and how John wants Henry. =) The scolding bit in the very beginning of the story is quite amusing, though there hasn't actually been much of that since your initial mention of it. Wonderful story!
heart race 2006-11-02 ch 2,	I LOVE this sentence: "john adored this man... lovable adversary." too lazy to write the rest but it's excellent. delicious!! vending machines suck real bad. i have punched and kicked and hugged and almost been crushed by them. and once i was trying to get my bagel chips out and this large black woman came over and without saying a word just shook the hell out of it and my chips fell. and she just walked away. bizarre! love it!!
nite3 2006-11-01 ch 2,	YES TO LONGER CHAPTERS AND TO ARTNESS. Also, ahahaha, chopsticks. Aha. Oh, and Henry is teh ghey. Also, it'd be funny if John & Henry get all "comfortable" with each other, and then John starts going "OH HENRY".
lucifel 2006-11-01 ch 2,	Fascinating new chapter. I love the dynamics in Henry and John's relationship, and the way that John mercilessly teases Henry. All in all a very, very nice story. I can't wait for the next update.
Esquirella 2006-11-01 ch 2,	LOL! Great rapport.

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