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| mspotts 2008-11-15 ch 12,   | I really like this story! The characters are interesting and defined. I hope you don't give up on it! |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-11-05 ch 12, | Gah, stupid Dante. Another great chapter! I love how we're caught up to speed with the first chapter now, yes? I also love how she shoved the ice cream in Ryan's mouth :D I think I've always been pro-Ryan, so that hasnt changed much :P Cant wait to read more!! Good to hear from you again ^_^ -Aria |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-11-05 ch 11, | Watching the stars from the school swimming pool would be absolutely amazing and romantic. Loved this chapter! -Aria |
| Shayla 2008-11-03 ch 12, | haha i am so glad you finally started updating again. it took forever! and nope. still a fan of dante. maybe i should give the others a chance though. TILL NEXT TIME! your amazing! |
| asconna 2008-11-03 ch 12, | get her 2gether wth another guy!!wooho, dat serves them rite..tehee~~ like ur story, cant wait 4 da nex chappie, update soon! |
| violet-eyez 2008-11-03 ch 12, | i don't kno, i feel like she doesn't choose any of them but instead walks away from them to become her own person |
| Jenna N 2008-11-03 ch 12, | Do you know how many chapters the story is going to be? And can you at least give us a LITTLE hint about who she's ending up with? All the suspense is driving me crazy. I'm torn between Ryan and Dante. Actually, as long as it's not Liam, then it's fine. Who's turn is it next? |
| StrawberryPop 2008-11-03 ch 1, | Interesting |
| violet-eyez 2008-11-02 ch 11, | so have you decided who she is going to end up with? |
| Jenna N 2008-10-28 ch 11, | I'm glad you didn't give up on this story. And, hopefully, you'll update more often from now on. ;p |
| MiseryLovedHer 2008-10-28 ch 11, | dont give up on this! i think the plot is really good and original and it's amazing how u combine all the cliches out there and come up with something so deep and insightful i had a few good laughs and it's been a long time since ive read a good read like this keep up the good work! really looking forward to the next chapter. |
| violet-eyez 2008-02-02 ch 10, | what's w/ her brother? what did he do and is she going to end up w/ liam if she does what will happen to the other two? and are u going to put up a voting poll to see who is more popular out of the guys? |
| miscellanea 2007-10-08 ch 10, | Omg please keep writing Don't stop now This one's really good! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-09-06 ch 10, | A, THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY! UPDATE! |
| MirrorMirrorOnTheWall 2007-08-20 ch 10, | Very Very good, Larissa is really intuitive isn't she? I loved this chapter! Especially the ending. Please post soon! Need to read more! MirrorMirror |