whoa, the lush description was an absolute treat! and i truly was glad that you added author notes - i like reading the extra information that really might come in handy for later chapters as well as your personal inspirations for certain aspects of the story.

although i would have put the little backstory warning at the beginning - i'm so tired that it took me a few minutes to realize that the events were taking place outside of the current situation. still, another fantastic update and i hope to see more! je kiffe et continue, s.v.p.!

Ah! This is so interesting. I wish I had better word to say than interesting, because really that word alone doesn't justify it enough. The author notes are as delicious (sorry for the lack of a better term ^^') as teh whole chapter! They seem to offer readers the back story. And that truly helps create more comprehension and entertainment of the story. Can't wait to see what's in store next! Update soon! ^^

yay! authors notes ^^! i love 'em, so much!

anyways, back to the story, i absolutely loved the character depth you gave to Aenor. she is rather interesting, especially with the way she tries to protect herself from others. and lastly, i like cake. so with your references to cakes, i was happy ^^. je l'aime beacoup!

The last few chapters have been astounding! I'm enjoying how it's progressing. The character relationships, the intruging plot and the marvelous setting--they're all spicying up the story in many degrees! Continue your marvelous work!

- The author notes do help to give a more clarified understand! Excellent job! Update soon!

Oh, that's unexpected- Kyria getting her memories back...I can't wait to see what she'll do and how she'll change after she gets them all back (if she does)!

my god, Aenor's a strrangge person. that vengefulness really seems like a rogue element. i'm not sure, but are you trying to get across that Aric is abusing her? It seems that way, but it's a bit unclear...

About the footnote exlpaining the educations of the three- I was surprised when you said that Favian had little actual education. It seemed he had a bigger knowledge base in politics than the other two though emil does seem the most stable in practical application (making him more capable to rule?), ...and aric seems the total odd one out...a word of advice, though...to keep Aric from being 'flat' as the typical 'vllian' , try to expose a bit of which of his experiences shaped him. Perhaps an insight into his mind would be more effective, because right now he seems obviously dangerous (and therefore easily thwarted)...a peek into his brain might make give insight...

"The most dangerous animal is the one that doesn't show ts teeth."

that sort of a thing...

Good job on the chappie!
*hug*

well, i thought that this chapter was highly suspenseful, especially with Lady Ione's request. i'm excited to see how it turns out, as well as the progress that Kyria and Favian are making. c chouette et continue, s.v.p.!

Ah, a mysterious start to a a story. Though the premise doesn't seem to be quite clear yet, i'm reather eager to see what happens next.

Me like! I like, I like it! Keep it up and update soon..Peace.

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wow - such a deep, thought-provoking update. everything was just flawlessly described, as always, and it felt kind of refreshing to read (although there was some tension in the middle). also, your author's note was interesting. it still has me thinking...

great update and good luck on the next chapter!

went alright? it was practically flawless! my favourite aspect of your writing is the way you describe scenes of mystery and what is unknown to the character - it is truly compelling and lush in simple description. keep it up!

i love getting more info (or at least hints) about Emil and Fallyn - i must also admit that i think they have the coolest names! also, i hope you will be able to update again soon...continue, s'il vous plaît!

hi! it's nice to read from you again, so let's hop to the review! first of all, the only major complaint i have is in the middle - you had one gigantic block of text, which almost made my eyeballs turn to goo. now, it could have been the document manager or something, so it's not really your fault. if not, when there's a huge speech from one character (which i believe it was), you can add some movement and break up the paragraph into at least half. other than that, everything is fantastic (as always)!

it was a progressing chapter! I really loved reading about Emil and Fallyn, since prior to this we hadn't seen much. The story is getting interesting :)And I am fascinated by the names you have given them! Good job :)

Wow this story is amazing! Very unique. I highly enjoyed it, so please update very soon! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

I like this alot. This is really compelling. I really can't wait for more. Excellent job.