Reviews for Don't Tell Me - FictionPress.com

Anamatronic 2006-11-25 ch 1,	Hullo Car =D I was lonely after you called me so I decided to read some of your stuff...this is actually pretty good...it reminds me of a song XD I could see it as song lyrics...some of the sentences sound kinda awkward but for the most part it's good...I'm vaguely reminded of a similar situation -.-...but yea =D Lyssa is proud of you! Did you put this up recently?
Gaki Toki 2006-10-27 ch 1,	The rhythm is off. It rhymes but the whole thing is just "askew"...isn't that the greatest word in the world? Anyways, I like the topic but...it just throws the whole impact off when it doesn't flow that well together... Gaki