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| Gaki Toki 2006-10-27 ch 1,  | abuse*shudders* Wow. I'm not sure what else to say, I think it's beautiful. Poetry bares the soul, and this is something I would send to a magazine or something, try to get it published someplace because it is absolutely AMAZING. I like it, and if I were the editor of a magazine I would be BEGGING you to be able to put it in...but alas, I'm an unemployed 15 year old who writes novels about pianists and serial killers...and writes poetry about sweet little nothings and bitter little nothings, and loves this poem so much I want to print it out and put in on my wall. Sorry for the monologue of the pathetic, I'm off to read more Stephen King and study Business Law...*sigh* Gaki |