the whole way the poem's put together is sort
of messy but it's still lovely.

alot in words in here i don't know, damn me and my
small vocubulary.

Wow. I really love your imagery, and the way you use words in places that wouldn't normally belong in the English language, but seem to fit in poetry. Abrasive fabric, patented smile... and I have no idea what 'sibilant' means, and now have to look it up.