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| fictitious facades 2006-10-27 ch 1,   | Again, amazing job channeling your anger into one place. Even though your anger comes from different place; the other person and maybe at yourself, you bring it all together. Your poems don't "flow" with a steady rhythm, but I don't think they need to. They are good just as they are. @->>- |
| Honor Bound 2006-10-27 ch 1, | dang, love this piece, reminds me kinda of one of mine i recenty wrote. like the stangling with your spine, rather brutal but evocative. good job, peace |