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| BlackDragon of F1R3 2008-04-09 ch 1,   | personally ... I suck a haikus. this is really good. again I'll state...I really don't know you very well, do I? |
| GeekyChica 2006-12-02 ch 1, | You kiss through the night, huh? *eyebrows raised suggestively* Does Carolyn know about this? Good poem, haiku works for you. WRITE MORE OR BE SLAUGHTERED. |
| THE LAST zHERO 2006-11-03 ch 1, | EEW GROS! "WE KISS THROUGH THE NIGHT"?!?!?!?!?! GROSO |
| Guardrail 2006-10-27 ch 1, | Wonderfully written. Reading this was like watching life go by, this is very realistically well written. Great work, keep writing. |