I love what you did here... how you drew the picture without really coming right out and stating a topic. It's like drawing a silhouette and expecting the reader to fill in the character, truely brilliant... keep it up

This kinda reminds me of that new MCR song "Mama". I like this, I really do. You've got something here, mon ami.

My heart goes out to you. The voice that you've used in this makes the situation identifiable and vivid for the reader. Very well written.

Wow, that was intense. Thst's a rough story to tell, and one amazingly done. I love the rawness in it. There's no perfect, pristine scheme. It just flows right through your soul. Write onwards.

*highfives you then hugs you* YOU ROCK! 0_0 *bookmarks poem* Only because i can relate. cept I started at nine. and my brothers 7. BUt if your poem is true and I don't doubt it's not YOU ROCK!