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under the influence
2007-03-13
ch 1,
abusegreat job! i can really sense the emotion there...
Kendyl Burch
2007-02-03
ch 2,
abusewow all i can say is AMEN! This poem is right on the money i cant help but think that way sometimes nice work
C.F. Anne
2006-12-22
ch 2,
abuseI liked the first one better...i don't know you could have developed the second more. anyway, these are fairly good poems. (: i hope that you end up writing more soon.
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