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| Lovedward48 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Awesome ending! I didn't see that coming. I like it!^^ You did a good job! All the details make it interesting and the ending is so emotional! Impressiv! |
| Baby Morrison 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseVery masterful. I love these sort of psychological pieces, especially the one-shots (as you will see if you visit my page). This is lovely. Almost flawless. I hope you don't mind if I add it to my slash C2. |
| XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseWow that was pretty good. Sad though. And stalker much lol. |
| tia_blue 2007-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoah. Did NOT see that coming...ya I can't say anything else, you've left me speechless! |
| Sangre Azul 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI think I've already reviewed this but if I hadn't I just want to say how wonderful this story it is. And what a great twist! |
| Bel 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a great one. Wonderful one-shot. Sad. And I love it. The last line shocks. Well done. :) |
| Sangre Azul 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, what a beautifully tragic story. I loved the sentence 'late as always, gorgeous as usual.' Not quite sure why but I think it sounds good. It's really good. |
| BluBerd 2007-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's wierd, but beautiful. The repition of "I watch him" really added to the somewhat haunting tone of the peice. It's creepy, and sweet and it's brilliant. Nice job. |
| smokydays 2007-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abusecool ending, i went all 'geez!' i really enjoy short, powerful pieces like this one |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseShort but powerful. And quite psychological, really. :D |
| NesquikDude 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, man. That was great. That ending just threw me off completely. What a psycho kid. At first I thought it was cute, the way he knew all those things about him. And then he got obsessive. And then, well, he shot him! This was really great. |
| Pyjamapants 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuse...omg |
| cheeseboi 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abusewhoa. *gasp* That was very beautiful. keep up the great work. =) |
| cynth ballerina 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseOh~ I never (in a million years) saw that ending coming! These are the kind of stories I love |
| twisted-glamour 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuse♥_♥ That was simply amazing. There's no other way to describe it... just beautiful ♥, twisted-glamour |