I know exactly how that feels. Good job.

another amazing poem..and so relateable..

One word: Fantastic.
I love the way you put across messages in such a direct way. My first favorite story.

"strangled dsesires and coveted lies"-** BRILLIANT, I adored those lines. The way this was phrased and arrange really helped the impact, and the short-but-sweet aspect did as well.

Glad to hear you'll watch the authors notes! Such a promising writer should always keep up on their maybe-flaws.

♥ Alice