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Take Off Your Shining Armor
Elizabeth Bilberry
2006-11-12 . chapter 1
There's a simple beauty to this that stays with me even after I have read it. Good job, the first two lines are touching.
EB
xhaiiro
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
This is such a sweet poem, I love it.
Crossing the Rubicon
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
This poem has a nice flow, and you don't force rhymes. Keep writing.
myheartiswaypastbeating
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
I like this especially the end. Well done.
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