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Catalina
2008-02-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it! All your Tudor ficlets are awesome and well written. Katherine is my favorite of Henry's queens. I'd love to read some more about Katherine.
hafsol
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abuseActually, your English is quite good.
You should write more.
I like your writing.
cassandra12271
2007-01-18
ch 1,
abuseVery good! ilike it1 I also like the twist in the end. Histiorcal writers say that Catherine was in love with Henry and Henry only. Not Arthur. Arthur is probably nicer than Henry. I like it. I Was surprise when you said she was in with Arthur. Very well-writen.
Gold from the Stars
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, though not exactly true to history. That's okay though.

What does "both by the hate King Henry VII" mean?
The Wordsmith
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abusefor english not being your first language, you're certainly very good! I know I couldn't write half this well in my second language, so I have to give you props!

Henry the Eighth and the Tudors have always fascinated me, so I had to read this, and I must say, awesome job! You've captured Catherine's hesitation and disgust at the situation perfectly- awesome job! I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work!
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