This was very nice. I felt that the narrator's emotion was deep for this one child, and you expressed that greatly. Well done.

Good story. I felt sorry for the guy, it seems his heart was in the right place but none of his plans really worked out. He shot the old man for nothing. You do have a point about helping children. They are our future.

~SirScott

I really like it! You could improve on the grammer a bit though. There is an open quote in there and some comma mistakes.

Hmm...this is really good, although a bit over-the-top in terms of violence. Good use of diagloue and monologue. Great job, overall.