some of the verses in which you appear to be trying to be cryptic in are painfully transperant. "i will slice you into a line/i will smell you again/i will lick your mirror". "i will light your face on fire/i will suck you in my lungs/i will be happy with you." "i will choke you till it's dry/i will choke you till your red/i will choke you from the head". i dunno, this piece just didn't do it for me. good effort though.

You hit the nail on the head with that poem.

SirScott

wow... sorry I don't have much to say now.

Wow that was really deep, I can see where you're talking about your drug addiction. "I would say the hurtful things
I’d say things that hurt me once before." That line reminds me of so many things. It was a good deep poem, good to read when you're feeling like reminiscing.