OMMG this is a freaking awesome story! i love dion! shmexxyy demon god he sounnds delicious

ROFL

anyway update soon i loved it!

I loved the story! Sorry I haven't review this whole time but i just couldn't stop pressing the next button I was so hooked =D.

I'm guessing there is going to be a sequel? Well, good luck ^-^

I love this story! It's well written and the characters are great. And I can't wait for a sequel...if there is a sequel (I'm thinking there is one, because of the bit at the end).

Oh, and if there is going to be a sequel, would you please update this story when it is up? Otherwise I wouldn't catch it...thank you!

Heya

I absolutely LOVE this stpry... it is by far one of the most AWESME ones iv'e reaad in a while...

Seriously, if this doent continue... as in finding out what happens with Dion and Trevor im gonna die! How does he have a kid... or did he fall in love. Lols, well either way I can't Wait!

If the next one is even half as good as this one it'll be twice as good as some of the stuff people write(no offence intended to anyone... im just a bit hypo)

Anyways.. digression much...

I really hope you write a sequel... or get it out... either way!


Thankies anyways...loved the story...(obviously lols)

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Hey!

First of all this story is great! a little confusing at times, but it has a fantastic plot and I love the characters.

Btb, what's up witht the last thing? does trever have a kid? its strange, but hey, cant hep but love it!

hope the next chapter comes out soon!!

THANKS!

What a great story! I can't wait for the sequel! Upload it as soon as you can.

HOLY ** CRAP.
He can't just DIE...
Holycrapholycrapholycrap. Is he MARRIED? To a GIRL?
In the next one I mean.
If Dion and Trevor don't get back together I think I'll die. Seriously.
A ** heart attack

Oh, excellent story by the way. You're characters take on a life of their own, and I'm sure your entire audience instantly fell in love with the adorable couple. I know I did.
...
But seriously, how could Trevor ever get over losing Dion and just...
God. I can't wait for the sequel.

Well THAT came outta the blue! Meet Trevor: manbitch. Poor guy's being hopelessly dominated all over the place... and not in the good way, either...

Hmm. A revelation like that is bound to hurt. I feel for the guy... for that and getting supernaturally raped in his dreams...

I like the suspense here. It sets the mood very well and will keep me hooked for a good long while.

As far as impressions go, I find this piece to be of a similar flavor as Talus: A Demon Story, as well as Twilight (without the wimpiness and fluff) and Artemis Fowl. All in all, a good remblence.

I'll be surprised if you don't get published soon...

Nice. A good start, if I say so myself. Thanks for making this.

While the character is snide and assumptive, I can still enjoy his commentary on his situation. I'm drawn to pariahs, so expect more brief, critical commentary from me soon...

My views and sights shall be made known. Be ready...

If you are going for the common colloquial expression, it should be "Your brilliance NEVER ceases to amaze me". It sounds like your going for sarcasm, in which case you want that "never".

Trevor has a kid?!?!? No wai. There must be some crazy amazing explanation to this. There just has to be...

Otherwise, amazing story, totally enjoyed it & I can wait for the sequel and it's CRAZY amazing explanation. (:
Till then...yea...

WTF?!?!?!

DUDE! Was that a sneak peak at the sequel? Or what?!

PAINFUL WAY TO LEAVE US HANGIN'!

UPDATE SOON!

*Rain

ARTEMIS AND KELLY ARE SISTERS! Well S.H.I.T!

Oh course, he has to go and die, right after admitting his love for Kelly, and of course, she realizes it too... Damn Paris.

*Rain