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| Black and White Dreams 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It flows nicely. I have the same fantasy... I'm sure a lot of people out there do... I like the last few lines a lot. *"Don't reach for the stars, reach past them."* Somehow this poem reminds me of that quote =/... *~Black and White Dreams~* |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI love this, and in a sense, its a fantasy of mine as well. |
| Nebelfee 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseand don't think this is corny at all! I think it's lovely and I hope your dreams/fantasy comes true! |
| Susurrus 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is pretty. I like. I can relate to the wishfullness...^_^ The cocoon/womb symbolisms are especially good. Good work! Susurrus |