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Black and White Dreams
2006-11-20
ch 1,
abuseI love this. It flows nicely. I have the same fantasy... I'm sure a lot of people out there do... I like the last few lines a lot.


*"Don't reach for the stars, reach past them."*

Somehow this poem reminds me of that quote =/...

*~Black and White Dreams~*
Travis C. Eckert
2006-11-11
ch 1,
abuseI love this, and in a sense, its a fantasy of mine as well.
Nebelfee
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseand don't think this is corny at all! I think it's lovely and I hope your dreams/fantasy comes true!
Susurrus
2006-10-31
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is pretty. I like. I can relate to the wishfullness...^_^

The cocoon/womb symbolisms are especially good. Good work!

Susurrus
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