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Julian Henleth 2006-11-02 . chapter 1
Wow. Thats a pretty intense, tragic little story. Very good. I'd like you to expand some more on the unclear morality of this. I mean, I understand that they had to kill the men, but a ten year old boy?

All in all, an excellent story. Keep writing.
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