this puts my life on paper...

I'm a huge fan of rhythm, and this poem has it.

I also love the repitition. It embodies exactly how it feels to be completely ignored.

Expressive. I think this poem could really benefit from a few more descriptive passages being thrown in. )

well written, i feel like this sometimes...it's annoying. but good poem :) keep it up!

I can relate to this poem. Well expressed. Very emotional piece. Keep writing.

Anna _

i like this. it's blatant and honest. :) good work.

-mir.