Impressionnant travail, mon ami. Impressionnant travail.

Which, in French, basically means 'awesome job.' I really like this.

Yes, I know I say that a lot with your stuff, but I swear I mean it. Whoever it is you write this stuff for, I wish I was her. She doesn't know how lucky she'd be.

(or maybe I'm just a sucker for great poetry ^_^;;)

hmm. quite a thought-provoking last line. I enjoyed the title and this poem, as a whole. Thank you for the enjoyable read. - Arcane Devices

The last line, it is just raw and powerful and open and beautiful. Really, really beautiful.

Lovely poem; I've miseed it and I just . . . Yeah; you make everything feel like one big hurt. In the good way.

~* Noelle