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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautifully sad. The counting of the tears makes it flow really well and emphasises the pain. Nice idea, good work. Best Wishes Holli x |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is so very sad! But so very well written. Nice job! I hope you can smile and be happy someday soon. XKristie MarieX |
| HappyBunny91 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseAw so sad. Wonderfully written! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, really good that you've counted within the poem, deep thought put into every word, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| bandgeek2011 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good I know I've felt it before and it sucks, alot I hate the feeling that your unloved. |
| Lotuss Tears 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseFor something that hurts both sides it's amazing how often breakups happen, I can identify with every line of this poem (Er...from a guys perspective...yeah we cry too!) Sorry that you're writing this from personal experience, but hey these things happen and are kind of unavoidable in life, but hey these things also happen to make us stronger! |
| n-Iceness 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abusei adore it, really i do. |
| Left On The Shelf 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved the format. Great job. |