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Reviews For: Counting The Sorrow

WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautifully sad. The counting of the tears makes it flow really well and emphasises the pain. Nice idea, good work.

Best Wishes
Holli x
XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is so very sad! But so very well written. Nice job! I hope you can smile and be happy someday soon.


XKristie MarieX
HappyBunny91
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseAw so sad. Wonderfully written!
Lurid Black
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseSweet, really good that you've counted within the poem, deep thought put into every word, keep writing!
~Lurid~
bandgeek2011
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good I know I've felt it before and it sucks, alot I hate the feeling that your unloved.
Lotuss Tears
2007-04-15
ch 1,
abuseFor something that hurts both sides it's amazing how often breakups happen, I can identify with every line of this poem (Er...from a guys perspective...yeah we cry too!)

Sorry that you're writing this from personal experience, but hey these things happen and are kind of unavoidable in life, but hey these things also happen to make us stronger!
n-Iceness
2006-10-30
ch 1,
abusei adore it, really i do.
Left On The Shelf
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseI loved the format. Great job.
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