Amazing. Powerful. Putting it on my 'favorites'. Thanks for reviewing.

Keep writing!

I love the imagery, I love the way you turn a national symbol into such a terrible thing - the reality. Very powerful poem, very good poem. Your word choice is excellent!

Sounds familiar...

This is awesome...sticking the USA where it needs to be.

Excellent word choice.

Favorite part: A pirate's flag, flying high blue and white, striped in blood.

Thats the USA flag...right?

i like this. its very...powerdul. the imagery is excellent!

Really powerful imagery used here - loved it!