Reviews for Is this meant to be

Black and White Dreams 2007-02-12 ch 1,	abuseExactly how I feel a lot. I have recently become invisible and hated by the girl who used to be my best friend. But that's okay. You have a few typos herwe and there, but good job on this. ~Black and White Dreams~
Guardrail 2006-11-06 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely written, I like the thoughtful quality to this poem. Great work and keep writing. And thanks for the review.
incognegro 2006-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI like this poem -- it is SO meant to be heard. I do have a few grammatical suggestions though. Line 8 -- "to non-existent" ... do you really want it to say that? And the second to last line begins with THAN, but I think you meant THEN. I like it when poems are spoken -- they become so much more powerful in their compactness.
Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-29 ch 1,	abuseSome good questions put to good work. Thanks for the review.