   TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-07-04 . chapter 1This is great, lovely rhythm to it and the imagery at the end is interesting, different kind of perspective and it works really well. Well done.
Best Wishes
Holli x |
 XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-12 . chapter 1aww this is really good! So very sad but so beautiful. Hope you heal and be happy soon!
XKristie MarieX |
 HappyBunny91 2008-01-29 . chapter 1Beautiful. Sweet. Well written. Good Job! |
 Lurid Black 2008-01-11 . chapter 1Wow, really well written, pulsing with emotion, great work, keep writing, and i'll keep reading!
~Lurid~ |
 bandgeek2011 2007-10-31 . chapter 1This is really good its so good to read somthing that I can really relate to your a geat writer. |
 silently watching 2007-06-07 . chapter 1reinds me of the girl i loved who was murdered by her dad. beautiful |
 Cum grano saltis. 2006-10-29 . chapter 1great work. the imagery in the last 4 lines is awesome! |
 Crivanea 2006-10-29 . chapter 1nice metaphors..especially the one on pirate's chest..strong meaning..and i like how u phased foundation.. simple and true..good job |
 Left On The Shelf 2006-10-29 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 Shadow Whirlwind 2006-10-29 . chapter 1I absolutely loved this. Loved the emotion, the flow, the way it was written. Great work, keep it up! |
 Guardrail 2006-10-29 . chapter 1"The map is lost But not forgotten". Great last lines. Very well written, I like this piece a lot. Keep writing. |
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