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TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-07-04 . chapter 1
This is great, lovely rhythm to it and the imagery at the end is interesting, different kind of perspective and it works really well. Well done.

Best Wishes
Holli x
XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-12 . chapter 1
aww this is really good! So very sad but so beautiful. Hope you heal and be happy soon!


XKristie MarieX
HappyBunny91 2008-01-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Sweet. Well written. Good Job!
Lurid Black 2008-01-11 . chapter 1
Wow, really well written, pulsing with emotion, great work, keep writing, and i'll keep reading!
~Lurid~
bandgeek2011 2007-10-31 . chapter 1
This is really good its so good to read somthing that I can really relate to your a geat writer.
silently watching 2007-06-07 . chapter 1
reinds me of the girl i loved who was murdered by her dad. beautiful
Cum grano saltis. 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
great work. the imagery in the last 4 lines is awesome!
Crivanea 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
nice metaphors..especially the one on pirate's chest..strong meaning..and i like how u phased foundation.. simple and true..good job
Left On The Shelf 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful.
Shadow Whirlwind 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this. Loved the emotion, the flow, the way it was written. Great work, keep it up!
Guardrail 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
"The map is lost But not forgotten". Great last lines. Very well written, I like this piece a lot. Keep writing.
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