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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is great, lovely rhythm to it and the imagery at the end is interesting, different kind of perspective and it works really well. Well done. Best Wishes Holli x |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseaww this is really good! So very sad but so beautiful. Hope you heal and be happy soon! XKristie MarieX |
| HappyBunny91 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Sweet. Well written. Good Job! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, really well written, pulsing with emotion, great work, keep writing, and i'll keep reading! ~Lurid~ |
| bandgeek2011 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good its so good to read somthing that I can really relate to your a geat writer. |
| silently watching 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusereinds me of the girl i loved who was murdered by her dad. beautiful |
| Cum grano saltis. 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abusegreat work. the imagery in the last 4 lines is awesome! |
| Crivanea 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abusenice metaphors..especially the one on pirate's chest..strong meaning..and i like how u phased foundation.. simple and true..good job |
| Left On The Shelf 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| Shadow Whirlwind 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this. Loved the emotion, the flow, the way it was written. Great work, keep it up! |
| Guardrail 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuse"The map is lost But not forgotten". Great last lines. Very well written, I like this piece a lot. Keep writing. |