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WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is great, lovely rhythm to it and the imagery at the end is interesting, different kind of perspective and it works really well. Well done.

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XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseaww this is really good! So very sad but so beautiful. Hope you heal and be happy soon!


XKristie MarieX
HappyBunny91
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Sweet. Well written. Good Job!
Lurid Black
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseWow, really well written, pulsing with emotion, great work, keep writing, and i'll keep reading!
~Lurid~
bandgeek2011
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good its so good to read somthing that I can really relate to your a geat writer.
silently watching
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abusereinds me of the girl i loved who was murdered by her dad. beautiful
Cum grano saltis.
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abusegreat work. the imagery in the last 4 lines is awesome!
Crivanea
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abusenice metaphors..especially the one on pirate's chest..strong meaning..and i like how u phased foundation.. simple and true..good job
Left On The Shelf
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful.
Shadow Whirlwind
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely loved this. Loved the emotion, the flow, the way it was written. Great work, keep it up!
Guardrail
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuse"The map is lost But not forgotten". Great last lines. Very well written, I like this piece a lot. Keep writing.
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