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| Manju 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseah the confusion caused by love. at least that's what this poem screams at me. again, i love your choice of words--making me feel how you felt. it's an emotional ride full of up and downs, mostly downs. good rhymes. they don't seem forced. keep it up! i enjoyed this one |
| Key of Grey 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI will think of this poem every time I hear someone say they are in an on-again-off-again relationship with someone. It's terrible when you KNOW that you are absolutely not made to be with someone, but it still feels so right. It's all addiction, I think! Must...break...habit. Must...have...willpower. he he. I liked the phrase "venomous embrace." Nice poem. Sara |