Reviews for They Tend To Forget This

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qtkemi 2008-08-12 ch 9,	abuseI absolutely luv the story! I don't even mind all the grammatical mistakes and foul language...I hope you update SOON because I really cant just sit here and wait for weeks (or-shudder-months) for you to update! BIG FAN, great job on story -KEMI
RadiantBeam 2008-08-11 ch 9,	abuseWow; so awesome :) Keep up the great work.
asianpearl101 2008-04-05 ch 9, anon.	abuseThis is going really well! I'm gonna ead your other story. anyway keep this going I really like it! update soon.
BeingMyself 2007-09-02 ch 9,	abuseWoo, go Jason for trying to tell off Tina! She would tick me off at that point too.
goodbyemylover 2007-09-01 ch 9,	abusethis is really cute. i hope you update soon!!
elocinicole 2007-08-31 ch 1,	abuseupdate please! i really like the story and i check everyday so please lets see here...besides for begging...constructive criticism...maybe a few more complex sentences with more detail, so far they get the point across but more description may help it seem more realistic.. try some more adjectives! not for the speaking really-since people don't talk with detail usually, but in some of the narrative besides for that i do really like your storyline
The Yuri Gnome 2007-08-29 ch 9,	abuseWhat to say, what to say, I've much enjoyed this little break from reality, and honestly, >.> I'd mawl Cooper. He officially has a fangirl. Yay for Cooper! I mean, what's not to love about him? He's cute, funny, completely insecure, and he has RED HAIR! spazzes But anyways, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, no matter how long it takes, and I will wholeheartedly go check out your other story. Toodles! And keep up to good writing!
Lethe's Oblivion 2007-08-27 ch 9,	abuseHey, I just found this story on someone's favorites list, and I absolutely adore it. Kaitlyn and Jason seem to be really well drawn out characters, and I really love reading their interaction. I'm really kind of hoping that Kaitlyn rips Tina a new one, soon, though, because I've been in the exact same situation and I can really empathize with her. The only thing I can really complain about is how Cooper sort of just dropped out of both scenes he was in. When he was at Jason's house, it was kind of like 'Okay, Jason and Cooper having a heart-to-heart, then bam! Jason goes and plays soccer and Cooper is nowhere in sight,' which is sort of what happened at the party, too. I'm really looking forward to the next update.
violin-lady13 2007-08-22 ch 9,	abusethis is great! i think i must have read a little bit of it when it was just the first couple of chapters posted, and i liked it then, but it's even better now that the action is really going. i really love it! i especially liked your handling of the one-on-one game the two of them play--call me crazy, but it did my feminist side good. i also liked how she beat him outright; so many times in these sports girl vs. boy match-ups, they tie, perhaps because the author wants to show them as equals in anything, so having kait win outright was refreshing. i also really love how there's this whole kait dealing with tina subplot. well done! hope to see more soon!
Secrets-Darken 2007-08-21 ch 9,	abuseI really like this story...its hilarous and gives me a different point of view about the perfect man! I really like how I got to find out more about Jason...seems like a man ** with all those comments about good lays (Am I right at all??) ...but still funny! Update Soon
violet-eyez 2007-08-21 ch 9,	abuseshe's starting to slowly accept him
Lady of Confusion 2007-08-21 ch 9,	abuseUPDATE SOON!
Haylieeeeeee 2007-08-21 ch 9,	abuseAh, good chapter :] I thought it was cute how he was standing up for her :] And I think im going to go check out your other story now.
love to sleep 2007-08-21 ch 9,	abuseI love this story! i love soccer and reading it in this story is so great! please update soon!!
Midnight Star17 2007-08-21 ch 9,	abuseGetting better and better! keep it up!

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