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| polka dots and addictions 2006-10-30 ch 1,  | abuseooh, i love the bitterness thats gone into this. "Just lay under your sheets (they're star spangled //you're// scarred and strangled)// chewing on your bloody pillow case// screaming along to//The STAR SPANGLED BANNER." lovely imagary there, really well written poem. thanks for the review. |
| Osunale 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseA very intriguing poem. It's fierce, and I think that it should be. "(burn that ** with the flag) / Lady Liberty won't ** you tonight" is blunt and necessarily vulgar. I couldn't imagine thoughts put better. |