Reviews for SelfAbsorption - FictionPress.com

Moondog Dozier 2006-10-31 ch 1,	abuseI like the subtle, everyday scene that you've created. Social anxiety and social class distinctions are difficult issues to write about. Well detailed and defined scene. Good work.
hey maria 2006-10-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is pretty good. I like the tone to this: simple, but it seems every word has been carefully chosen. And I like the way it reflects on something I've noticed too, that everyone is always too self-absorbed to go even a little bit out of their way to help someone else. The last word is a great ending because it has a double meaning: the bathroom is now occupied, yeah, but so is everyone else. Everyone is occupied with their own lives and can't spare a thought to anyone else's. Nice job.
Osunale 2006-10-29 ch 1,	abuse"Her perfect pout was painted red" wonderful phrasing. This has an air of The Alone that I find distinctly human and interesting to read. Lovely work.