OMG no!


I loved this! I really loved Trey, I can imagine his hotness*drools*Lol

But no really, this was a brilliant story and I love the way that you acutally have a proper time sequence. In some stories things like that just go out the window after the first chapter. So yeah, brill sotry, just sad that you're not continuing with it=[

Erm...what I said like thirty seconds ago. Bye! *Hug*

Wow I just realized this is from 2006. Too bad you discontinued the story :( It was beginning to get interesting.

Love the story, but I a couple concerns.
-Maybe tone down the cursing? I mean, I'm not against cursing, it just seems a little overdone.

MISTAKE!
You said that Zelda got in HER car, and DROVE to do her application, but only one or two chapters ago, she didn't have a car...nor did she have a permit. Lol. Might want to fix that, but no biggie, I make the same sorta mistakes :)

Keep up the good work, and I'd love to apply for editor if you're still looking for one :)

As many other people said this story was getting really good.
And i soo wanted to read some more but i couldnt. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! You're a great writer and i think you should continue with this story.

ok I dont know if this one makes up ten for you but even if it doesnt i want you to know that you shouldnt rely on reviews just to write because sometimes people dont want to read unfinished stories - i've been doing that lately, if i know a story is unfinished i won't bother to read it coz after reading and getting pulled into the story, getting myself worked up in the process, in the end i'd be left on a cliffhanger waiting for god knows when the writer would next update, and it just sucks real bad you know? coz it totally wastes my time. so now i check the status whether its complete or not.
this story is one of the few exception since i just finished RHIMA and was interested to see where this is goin, and i can already tell its going to be great. now you just need to continue with it!

dont give up on this story - you're building a gem. really.

update

=D I adore this story.

Update update update!
ME likes it!
I know, me haves excellent grammar, doesn't I?
heehee KIDDING! i dont think anyone speaks - or writes- that badly!
UPDATE PLEASE!!
(EBONYHEARTS)

Okay I know it has been a while since you updated so you may have just stopped, but I just want to say I LOVE this story! It is just like your other ones (in the way that it is good not that it is unorginal) Sorry to ramble but just had to say that!

Okay, it's time to update! I counted about 30 reviews for chapter 5, and now, TIME TO UPDATE! Please? Ice does indeed sound creppy. Update the sequel to RHIMA soon, too.

Hahahaa...I love this guy. Your characters are always so...gah, what's the word...non-fickle and non-shallow. xD You do a really good job with showing off their personalities. I really enjoy all of your writing, so please update asap! ^^

that Ice guy creeps me out too *shiver* lol
i bet mango is so cute~

Um. No. Trey is Trent. And, yes, I have noticed you like names that start with Tr-. But, wait! Theres Ryan, too! So, HA! One name that doesn't start with Tr-.

i no this is good but i'm not reading it right now because i'm waiting for my chapters because it sounds good and i dont want it to end quck >_

Hey this is a really good story, I also liked your other one RHIMA you should update soon.