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Slightly Obsessive 2006-11-05 . chapter 1
Short, sweet and interesting. I wonder if a new paragraph should begin at "And then the second passes...", though.
scotti 2006-10-30 . chapter 1
eyes, glimpsing the soul...blending, binding, merging, stirring, feeling then departing all too soon...a lifetime of love lived in the split second that it takes to breathe. More than a mystical mirage indeed and real beyond measure, yet you have managed to find the words to describe it with such emoiton and truth. This one was worth the wait, Michael. I enjoyed it as I do all your work.~Scottie

PS. What is it that makes a person look again? If they choose to do so, will they find the same as before or will the window be closed causing them to see only their reflection?
Cass Boothe 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful words to describe an often over looked miracle.
tsarevich alexei 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
I love the concept in this, and the way you described it was stunningly beautiful, I know just what you mean.

Excellent.
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