for the love of funnel cake..Please continue this.D:

Good story - hope you keep writing

CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE? PLEASE??!??!?!!?!?YOU'RE KILLING ME!IM LIKE SLOWLY DYING!

Now listen here girl, you have got to update this. I mean it. Talent like yours rare on this site, much less a story with so much creativity, and it deserves to be finished. I was so glad you didn't go into that whole copying-Twilight scenerio, that so many writers are doing now, in the vampire/supernatural romance catogry, and actually made a story with strong, unique, characters who have flaws and great chemistry together.

1. Sophie- She's a great character whose a perfect balance of confidence and flaws; basically she's real. She's also really mature which I like, and her own person. It's also great how she deals with Aridos, by allowing herself to try and get to know the man he is under all that confidence and attitude, but the sametime not allowing him to walk all over her. I think she's really showing him that if their gonna get together, he's going to need put some effort into being with her and learning about her needs (not just the sexual kinds either). I like also that you made her striking, but not in a perfect Helen-of-Troy kinda way, but rather as a real woman would look.

2. Aridos- Thank God, that you made a male lead who isn't an Edward Cullen-clone (personally I never went for Edward anyway, no offense to any Twilight-fans)! Aridos can be a dark, pain-in-the-**, jerk, but you also show that he does have deeper nature to him, that Sophie is showly bringing out in him. It's really something to watch him come to accept that he is falling inlove with Sophie, and even more, realizing that he just doesn't want her body, he also wants her to love him. His feelings scare the ** out of him, and drive him crazy, but he knows their real and that they're just getting stronger. Plus him and Sophie are just really, REALLY, sexy together, and there's also a real sweetness in their relantionship once they get to know each other.

I luurvve this story so much...write more

Every time I read this story I fall in love with it all over again. Please update soon! I know it's been a couple of years since you've last updated this, and it'll be hard to get back into the mindset of it, but this is an amazing story and shouldn't be dropped. Things are just starting to change between the two of them, and it really makes me want to know what happens next.

As Ever,
~Ember

I know I reviewed before but when are you gonna update this? You said you didn't give up..., please put up an author's note if you can telling us what's happening!

I love your plot but when I checked ur last update it was over 2 years ago! >.< This is my most favorite story on Fictionpress. I'm really hoping this year you'll update.

I found myself annoyed with Sophie at first, thinking, 'awhell, she would *so* be all over that' (that would be my inner-pervert getting all hot and bothered). However, I'm glad Sophie resisted. It shows a lot more depth to her character as a three dimensional person, not just an excuse for some hot sexing (though it would be quite lovely). I'm glad their relationship is not being rushed, but is progressing (the sexual tension is FUN).

Honestly, the library scene would be very scary and I'm glad she struggled. I think I would have lost respect for her had she completely given in. I was afraid when I first started reading that Sophie would be another Bella, but I'm pleasantly surprised to find her stong-willed. She's real. the "beautiful" scene- I was thinking, erelate. and I smiled with her and blushed with her and maybe my heart beat a little faster. I love it when a story evokes that kind of reaction (unless I'm in a public place. embarrassing) because that means I'm so lost in it, I don't even realize I'm reading anymore. those are the best ^^

can't wait to read more.

Of course I find a story that I actually enjoy (Where have all of the good fictionpress writers gone??) but it hasn't been updated in 2 years.

I hope you decide to continue, or pursue publishing because this is honestly one of the best stories I've read when it comes to originality.

If you do plan to continue, could you slip us an Author's Note or just a little something to keep us patiently waiting? I know life sometimes gets in the way of writing, but I truly think this story is too good to abandon.

Hope you continue,
Aspiring Empath

I like this story. I really, really like this story, and I want to read more. Um, is it possible for you to post again? Like, ever? You haven't posted in two YEARS. That's a long time. Are you still on this site or working on this story?

hury with the story dear...



im eagerly waiting whats going to happen!

hey srry i havent been on in a while school u know well i love your work it is just like a author i read a lot have u ever thought about vampire romance novels? i think ud b good i read it i think ur great u just need to work on it k ? ur spectacular. hey g3g k but ttyl love yah =) good luck n good health.

OH COME ON ! UPDATE ALREADY ! ITS BEN AGES !

Awesome story. Really good, I love it. Please keep updating thanks:)