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detective
2008-05-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseThese two sentences are confusing. They need some revising.
“The need tp ne your own unique individual is something everyone only hoped to achieve at some point in their lives. But by trying to do so, are you not”
“told? Is that what shapes us into the people that we’re supposed to be? Well what is what we are is not what ‘society’ wants or accepts? Do we conform”

This is very nice, though, and meaningful
dominic+leo
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abusetotally agree with you on this. but in an attempt to answer your question yes i do believe that some one can truely be an individual, but also agree with you that people tend to be near those that are like them because of comfoft issues. i kinda sorta feel the same about being a black sheep. i have aslo been tohe odd one in the group, the unsocialbe loner. is that truely that bad? why does it matter that i don't like being near people? or that i'm always hyper and love yaoi? that's what makes me who i am. i agree that it's not wrong to be different, but then why are we brainwashed to fear anything that's different from us. we and us being the general society. for example (and i mean no offence by this)most of us are taught from a very young age that it is wrong for two men or two women to love eachother. we are also taught that women, blacks, and the working class are inferior. it seems to be that the only way someone can be accepted in this society is by being a straight, white, rich, prostant, male. if you're anything else you're second class. and then god forbide if you're a little different. okay, i'm sorry for ranting. this is sort of a touchy subject for me. but i just wanted to say that i (like all of your writing) really like this piece. i think you're very intellegent for only being 18. it's funny i'm 17 and i'm nowhere near as insightful as you. why is that do you think? well anywho i'll stop talking and let you get on with whatever you were doing(hopefully it's writting another wonderful story) ^-^
-Dommy
red-headed psychopaths want...
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseYour view is incredibly like mine on this subject! I love to be different and to do what ever the hell I want to do but the problem is there is always this nagging feeling at the back of my head saying "what am I?". Am I goth, emo, nothing at all? Or am I just like everyone else, trying to fit in by not fitting in?
I don't know. I think we can all try to be non-conformist in whatever way we can and still in some way be fiting in or be trying to fit in. As long as we give an effort, though, I don't have as much of an issue with it.
^.^
Awesome one-shot!
Siyaa
2006-10-30
ch 1,
abuseI always said I stuck myself in with all the "others", but since we're all similar, I guess we really aren't "others". Never really thought of it quite like that, but it is very true.

A few tiny typos in the second and third paragraphs(like, three altogether). I'm a perfectionist. That kind of stuff annoys me. Even though I do it too... o.O Anywho.
vimaro22
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is really a loaded piece you've written here, and I can't say that I disagree with you. I just never really thought about what you've touched here.

You've got a very interesting perspective, and it was nice to read about it. The message you're sending, I think, is very universal.

Well done.
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