Sadly, I have to say that I feel this piece isn't one of your strongest. I mean, are you sorry you left/it left you? Are you proud the subject matter left/you left? Though, it does have a Sarah Mclauclan (yeah, yeah, wrong spelling...blah, blah, blah...so sodimize me! lol) or Alanis Morrisette feel to it (I could compare it to other things, but I only know what I know).

wow, i can tell it's more raw than usual, but some of it came out perfect already.

i really like your more broken sentence fragments [though that suits my style] like "misdirection, cursed reflection" and the like. also the stanza beginning with "you threw.." makes me happy but i am not sure i catch its meaning. it's just a nice little bundle of words and i appreciate it.


anyway. as usual i hope all is well cause i haven't been on MSN to find out in months.