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| awesomelyme 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abusereally good. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| AnakLuun 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseEmily should be on that list, Laur. Tell me so I'll know. If you never call for help, my friend, how will I know when to show? |
| InViSiBlE wOmAn 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI can totally relate to this! It's dark and sad but excellently written. Awsome! |
| Master Tananh 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good work. Pain just seems to flow from every word. |
| Seisaset 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseo i liked that! its flowed really well, but it was sad. haha you're still a better writer than me but thanks for the review on Faded |
| And Your Little Dog Too 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abusei loved this nice work! :) |
| Mosaic Stains 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is very nice, I feel the emotions swimming around from the rhythmic rhyming. The semmetry is pretty colorful, too. Mainly within the beginning stanzas. Really nice work here. |
| poemkitten7 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseWow!! This is really good. Very intense and dramatic. Great rhymthm and rhyming as well. Keep it up!! =D ~Sara |