Aw...that was so sweet! =)
Excellent job with the flow and slant rhyme!
I loved the lines "He sees her sitting and he dips a bow,/The clock said eleven, but his heart said now,". That's great!

Thanks for reviewing my poem, too!

Good luck with your writing.

--HopelessDreamer07

aw this is sweet. seems kinda like it would only happen in a movie or something but i still love it!! it flows really well too. ^.^