normally as a personal thing I really don't like poems with all the (( but this one makes it work so well, it's like you can sense all the differnt people in the room talking and thinking their own things about this kid.

it's really good :)

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I like this a lot. The style of it is very unique and interesting. The ((we understand))...it alomst makes you want to laugh...they never understand (everyone has their own problem no one it quite the same). Keep writing forever and always. Please R&R me sometime.

Not Quite Dry Eyed

Wow. I really like the fact that you use an original format and with nonconformist organization... it really does bring to life the fact that the speaker realizes that he's a completely different person from what he is supposed to be.

I think this is going on my favorites too.

wow I get a perfect picture...not something I read everyday but I like it its something different...going on my favorites :]

Hey this is so cool! Lol, it made me laugh a lot. The formatting is purfect, the () sensational and I can just hear different voices..it reminds me of those SF movies when someone is talking to a machine...the voice of the "annoying b-i-t-c-h" gave me that impression. Love this!

ha, your piece makes me think of whoever came up with the introduction for AA meetings ... "(i don't want to recover)" very powerful because i felt that way before. i think i'm adding this to my favs list.

recovery is such a tricky little word.