So beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it.

Well done with this, very well written!

Keep writing! Take care.

Luv, Vix x

this is really good! I love the flow and the rhyme. You put all the words I've been trying to explain for years all in this. truly good.

Sorrow

there is a point in life where you know

most love is not real

I like it. The rhyming is great. I also like the tone. At the beginning it seems more bitter than it becomes questioning then becomes dismissive(i think that's a word). Great poem. :)

not bad...a few spelling errors..but i enjoy the content of the poem..it makes me wonder how our society is..lol