Very good, I'll be reading more of this!

I've updated Chasing Princes with and EXTRA long chapter, if you'd like to read!

Kayla Christine

sari!

no has puesto nuevo chapter!

urgee!

hola, sari!

esta historia tambien me gusta... pero yo pense que el knight se había enamorado de Princess Calida... pero el dice que todavía no supera a su esposa, que es comprensible claro, pero y luego la princesa? jajaja al menos que salga alguien mejor... necesita cambiar su actitud.. jajaj

bueno, sari, byee!

sorry it took me so long to review lol . Intresting first chapter , I love the orginal names too & of course I love the title . Lol very awsume .

I will read more later .

Write On .

COnfuzzld Me

I like it. Sorry I don't have anything more constructive to say. . .

Keep up the good work.

No sabia que hablabas espanol. muy bien. me gusta tu story. My spanish sucks. sorry. Yes, very good. There's alot more improvement from the last one.

sari! me gusto mucho! jaja esta super padre... pero a el knight lo conocio casually... es malo? no jajaja, bueno... esperare el siguiente capitulo. byee!

Oh, interesting developments. So the knight shall travel with them? what about the servent? Eh, I probably missed something, i confuse easily. Update again soon, i cant wait to find out what happens!

Interesting start. Keep going. I need more to really suggest anything.

It wasn't a very closed ending for what the story was going for, but other than that, it was very good. I like the storyline and the anti-damsel in distress thing going on. Pretty awesome. Yes, just the ending and spelling...

this is interesting, it seems to have a good story line, though it was a bit hard to follow...though that could be my fault. update again soon, i would like to find out what happens.