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| An-Author-At-Heart 2006-10-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis is nice. I like the analysis of smiling and crying, and the part about the mother speaking and the meaning of the Chinese name I thought was a great touch, and it seemed to add a dash of something personal. |
| Reborn As I 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abusei think i kinda understand the feeling you're describing here. i think you hit your target. |