this feels real.
i like it.

Oh (**) darling, I can't--

you've made me cry for all the pain and the huge connection I have to all these pieces. Perfectly worded, this has made my faves many times over.

all the imagery and feeling packed into this little poem is incredible. Wonderful job.

♥ Alice

Hey. I am betting you've felt the feeling of knowing someone is destroying you slowly inside out but yet you love the person so much that you won't (you can't) do anything because it'd kill YOU instead.

Emotion talks.

ohh i like it!..good job..its very sad and depressing..but i love ur style!