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| PocoSnow15 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. That was amazing. It describes something I'm in right now really, really well. Wow. I loved your use of colors. It was so simple yet so complete. Really, really well done. |
| Dalamar's Girl 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. I like your use of colors. I think it can get annoying with same old 'red'. I like it when u say crimson! |
| Poker Fish 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason, the word crimson is constantly playing in my head now. And that's a good thing. You have a very unique style of writing poetry. Also, the message of the poem is so subtle, but at the same time, very deep. Thanks for the great read. |