Great story! Seems like you haven't updated it in a while though...

Updates soon!

Yes, Aly learning to use her abilities is important, but...where's Eimania?

This is another cool one, although it contradicts the whole "i wish i could control my powers" thing that i was complaining about last chapter. Other than that, i think that this is amazing. I would really appreciate it is you would read my story that i briefly mentioned in my chapter 1 review. I really need some reviews because nobody every seems to review any stories i post. It is called Gems and Stones (dont ask, its a long story and im bad at titles). Anybody reading this, feel free to check it out (sorry if i'm taking away from your audience author people).

This was another good one. I though that the whole "i wish i could control my powers" thing was a little too deus ex machina, but it was still well written.

I really like this. I will admit that i definitely prefer high school over college (as you would understand if you read what is currently my only story), but i though it was really cool. Me, being the type of person who loves anything supernatural and magical, definitely liked the end the best of all.

Ooh I like the way you turned what could have been a completely harmless story into something that has potential for danger.

o, interesting. At th start you moved quite fast, maybe you could explain the trees, waterfall and cave more. Anyway good job.

O.O i like, i like a lot _

This is well written and it is holding my interest I must say. I like the little troll, but I would.

I like that Aly didn't know all her spells, and they are pretty clueless to their powers. The thought to return to their own world should have came into Aly's mind. She might not be inclined to do so, but the thought should have occurred in some way or another.

As for Seamus, you should have made him an Irish Settler. Hey, it would have been ironic. I like the doggie jokes and the worry about whether he is getting fleas or not. A nice comment there on the sight as well.

Okay, I bite. I'm not really into these kinds of stories, but this was not all that bad. There is quite a few nice character interaction, and Alyssa comes off well. Even her friend Nia comes off good and unexpected. I do have to admit that I like Seamus the best of the three of them.

Oh, and mind you, New Year's should be the first day of spring in my opinion, but I do understand where you are coming from with Samhain.

Sounds good so far, I only spotted one error, you said near the end goddess when i think you meant goodness, anyway it sounds interesting. Well done. Can you do a review for the betrayal?

Okay, I held off on reviewing this long enough. I really like where this story is heading and I LOVE SEAMUW! Sorry, I had to say that. Nia is an amazing character and is a brilliant combination of a lot of people I know. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

S.S. Dailey

Oh...You got me. Now I'm intrested. It's strange how writers get a lot of ideas during halloween.

I had to laugh at the beginning. Ah, it reminds me of my stupid friends.

I'll be waiting for an update! It's good so far.