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blister 2007-07-27 ch 1,	abuseThat's a profound idea. Very nice.
Nature's Glory 2007-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI take it you saw a guy whom inspired you to write the demon :/ This does seem as if it was taken out of a story, an excerpt or something. It could be really deep, really involving you know? Maybe you should think about starting your own thing with this, not just off your friend's story idea. I'd support it with my reviews (as powerful and impressionable as they are to people sarcastic laugh)!
Ramenluver 2007-07-05 ch 1,	abuseOkay, in the first few paragraphs, the woman asks "Are you following me?" The old man replies "Doncha' know?" She should have said "why are you following me?" That's the only burn I can deliver. lol ^_^ Beautiful like poetry.
Dust Cloud 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseHi, O Mighty Eloquent Author! I want to join the Mighty Pencil Club. It sounds cool. I really like your description in the story. This story is just so very. And no, that was not a typo. :D Haha, it's kind of late at night. And I write WEIRD reviews late at night. :p
For What Its Worth 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseVery intriguing. And totally true. I really must read this 'Hero'.
Goddess Aurora 2006-11-27 ch 1,	abuseHmm..I am a bit confused in the middle. I don't know who you were refering to when you said "he". But after reading the whole thing, I think I understand. There's one thing I don't get though. What did the blue eye man do that made him a demon? And what did that homeless man do that made him an angel? Perhaps, the blue eye man was looking down on the homeless man?
Joelle Duran 2006-11-05 ch 1,	abuseWow--I loved this! You had me quite jumpy at the beginning, and you did a great job of describing the old man in a repellant way--made it easy to imagine him. I like the incubus feel you gave to the 'hottie.' There's just so much a person can take from this--fabulous work here! (And yay to Numinor29 for the inspiration!)
Elicael, Fire Sarien 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuse(Sorry it took so long to review; it was crazy over here.) Wow, that's a really good message. :o It's so true, too. Hehe, wow, what I originally thought it was going to be about was so wrong. . . . Anyways, this was a good story. :) It was kind of short, but that's okay. :P ;) You should write more stories like this. :) :P ~Elicael, Fire Sarien~
Elwing StarSpray 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseThis is cool. =) Me like.
E.B. Keane-Farrell 2006-10-31 ch 1,	abuseI loved this. Really, I do. The message was so great, so important. Usually, beauty is always carries the taint of evil, and you portray this perfectly. It is the rare beauty who is kind. (I know that in my current series, I totally send the opposite message, which I wish I hadn't, but oh well. >_
twistedFAerieTALes 2006-10-31 ch 1, anon.	abusedeep :D nice message & well written =)
Mayaj 2006-10-31 ch 1,	abuseWow. Casey... wow. Speechless. Beautiful. Wow. Adding to favorites.
wolfblood82 2006-10-31 ch 1,	abuseDude, that was a bit freaky IMO. But anyway, this really reminds me of the Lord's instruction on judging people. The logic just seems the same. "Do not judge and you will not be judged. Do not comdemn and you will not be condemned. Forgive and you'll be forgiven." (Luke 6:37) Actually, now that I've said it, I do find that the attitude of judging is pretty prevalent in the current society. People always judge others by what they see where in fact that is not everything about them. In the Lord's time, people were all looking down on people like tax collecters etc, but why the Lord chose to be with them? I think that's an issue of God's judgment on people. He knew every life here like the back of his hand and sometimes, people whom we don't expect ourselves to like are the ones having God's blessings, just like what the case is in the New Testament. Well, not much to say about this, but at least I do find this interesting...

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